I really think Kyra did a very well job grasping my attention and laying out the blog very nicely. I like the way she started the blog with several rhetorical questions, had the middle paragraph be all the information, and the last paragraph be her opinions. This allowed for the reader to understand the blog’s purpose and its focus. The information in the middle paragraph was a little choppy and I wish that it flowed a little better, but Kyra still packed a lot of information into a single paragraph very easily. I previously did a blog on the same topic but structured it differently, but I personally believe Kyra's layout was presented better. I like how in the last paragraph, her opinions paragraph, she still included facts to back up her claims and included several different opinions. Overall this was a very well written blog and I really like it, but if I were to fix one thing I would restructure the middle paragraph to make it flow easier.
Monday, October 17, 2016
Reviewing a Classmate's Blog: Kyra Johnson
http://theindependentperspective.blogspot.com/2016/10/comment-on-topic-discussed-in-class.html
I really think Kyra did a very well job grasping my attention and laying out the blog very nicely. I like the way she started the blog with several rhetorical questions, had the middle paragraph be all the information, and the last paragraph be her opinions. This allowed for the reader to understand the blog’s purpose and its focus. The information in the middle paragraph was a little choppy and I wish that it flowed a little better, but Kyra still packed a lot of information into a single paragraph very easily. I previously did a blog on the same topic but structured it differently, but I personally believe Kyra's layout was presented better. I like how in the last paragraph, her opinions paragraph, she still included facts to back up her claims and included several different opinions. Overall this was a very well written blog and I really like it, but if I were to fix one thing I would restructure the middle paragraph to make it flow easier.
I really think Kyra did a very well job grasping my attention and laying out the blog very nicely. I like the way she started the blog with several rhetorical questions, had the middle paragraph be all the information, and the last paragraph be her opinions. This allowed for the reader to understand the blog’s purpose and its focus. The information in the middle paragraph was a little choppy and I wish that it flowed a little better, but Kyra still packed a lot of information into a single paragraph very easily. I previously did a blog on the same topic but structured it differently, but I personally believe Kyra's layout was presented better. I like how in the last paragraph, her opinions paragraph, she still included facts to back up her claims and included several different opinions. Overall this was a very well written blog and I really like it, but if I were to fix one thing I would restructure the middle paragraph to make it flow easier.
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